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Post by Nick100 on Sat Apr 02, 2016 10:49 pm

Name: Krieg.
Age: Youngling.
Species: Krogan.
MOS (Military Occupational Specialty) : As brute as they come.
You do understand as this is a private server and you have filled out a Application you can be removed from the Server or have your Character taken away within reason at any moment: Yes.

Two Paragraph Backstory(For Returning players it is only one Paragraph), Five to Seven Sentences per Paragraph.

A Krogan is seen arriving aboard the ship, distinguishable by his scales and skin as that of what could only be referred to as a 'baby' of his kind. Krieg, named after war itself, born in the midst of war itself, is a youngling that is out with a thirst for blood and combat, and he never stops eating either.

He is now with the Task Force with the hope of being mentored underneath the larger, more experienced Krogans, with the intent and hope to become as great as they.


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Re: nick's app

Post by Satan on Sat Apr 02, 2016 11:36 pm

1. It doesn't fit the minimum sentence requirement.
2. A Krogan wouldn't leave as a youngling, there is no way they'd let it.
3. You didn't really give us a backstory. It was some sentences and thats about it.

"It would be easy to get lost up there, wouldn't it? To find someplace very far away, where you could spend the rest of your life in peace and happiness."


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