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Oh shit here come dat raider

Post by BillCosby on Mon May 30, 2016 7:07 pm

YOUR NAME: Shannon Stevens

VAULT USER NAME[Steam Username]: ThefreshPrinceOfNewYork

VAULT USER ID[Steam ID]:STEAM_0:0:49381279

AGE: 27

DESIRED OCCUPATION[WHY SHOULD YOU BE ACCEPTED?]: The wasteland needs raiders, and Shannon should set a good example for them.

WHAT ARE YOU GOOD AT?: Combat, Physical strength, Hunting, intimidation.

WHAT COULD YOU BE BETTER AT?: Leadership, socializing with people other than raiders and such, Intelligence.

ANY MEDICAL CONDITIONS?: Small Jet addiction.

DO YOU UNDERSTAND THE OVERSEER'S WORD IS LAW AND WILL ALWAYS REMAIN SO?: Sure.

TELL US SOMETHING ABOUT OUR GREAT COUNTRY!: It's got plenty of guns in it to hunt down wastelanders.

YOU DO UNDERSTAND YOUR VAULT MEMBERSHIP[Character] CAN BE REMOVED AT ANY TIME CORRECT?: Yes.

CURRENT EQUIPMENT: R-91 Assault rifle, Sturdy metal chest and arm armor, 400 caps, 2x Jet inhalers, bag of ears, wooden baseball bat wrapped with barbed wire.

BACKSTORY[1-2 Paragraphs MINIMUM 10-20 Sentences]:She was born in one of the various wasteland settlements that scatter the wasteland just like most wastelanders. She grew up relatively free, with a negligent, busy family where she was left to explore the area around her home town. She often stayed with rougher people when travelling, to avoid being picked out by slavers and other opportunists. Soon taking on some traits of them and developing some, herself. She became one of the more hardened people out there, trying to impress whoever was her protection or just doing it to intimidate locals. Growing older she found more discontent with her home, eventually deciding to pack her things and leave.

She swiped her fathers hunting rifle early in the morning and wandered out from the settlement, searching for an area with some form of civilization. But after a few days of travel she came across nothing but small ghost towns and the occasional hub full of various low life psychos and sadists that inhabit the wasteland. She eventually settled for one, taking residence in an old building among the small ruined encampment. She became more involved in raider activities, harassing and occasionally taking captives from passing groups of wastelanders, or picking off the lone wolves that try to carelessly explore the wasteland. She began to bring other raiders along with her when roaming around, using her ruthlessness to supplement her leadership skills. She soon found herself amassing trophies and gear from the frequent acts she committed, backed up by other drug addled raiders who were in it for the thrill of their sadistic hunts. While not really considered a leader among them, she was one of the more active ones when it came to making life worse for the passive settlements near them and whoever came across their camp.

Once finding herself an influential figure around the area with a camp full of armed raiders with little resistance to her torment she began to attack and harass the larger settlements in the times they were nearly defenseless. After the short period of chaos in the lawless region, the raider gangs began to die out or move on due to less opportunities. Soon finding herself alone, Shannon lived off of he food and drug supply she had acquired before moving on, collecting the ears of her trophies in a pouch and bringing along some equipment to find another place to establish herself as one of the worse raiders in the unknown, possibly more challenging area of the wastelands.

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Post by Satan on Mon May 30, 2016 7:41 pm

You did read that we are starting out in a vault, correct?

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Post by BillCosby on Mon May 30, 2016 7:47 pm

Yes, which is why I'm not going to be using her until we leave it.

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Re: Oh shit here come dat raider

Post by Pianotugboat on Wed Jul 20, 2016 1:29 pm

Okay so, here's my take on it. She seems sadistic in a way that is a gag. Or a hobby. Collecting ears is a weird concept sure, but that's the end of the road and story for when we encounter her. It feels almost washed up in a sense of we've seen it before or we've dealt with it before. Shock tactics don't really work in a internet community anymore, character wise it will but empathy with other wastelanders is normally thrown out the window oocly and sometimes even IC, the idea behind some raiders is to personalize them and give them real character arcs rather than just junkies along for the kill and ride, which is okay sometimes when you have to fill the void in combat rp, but if we're talking a player character, we need a bit more. Take a look at the app and reconsider what kind of character you might want. Leaving it to pending.
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Re: Oh shit here come dat raider

Post by Satan on Wed Aug 03, 2016 5:51 pm

Denied.
She has little reason to be a Raider or collect ears. What is the point of it?

The Equipment is out of no where as you did not tell us how she got her hands on it.

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