That admiral bloke again. looks like he wants to apply.

Steam Name: Atlis Admiralis

Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:6059942

Profile Link: http://steamcommunity.com/id/Yoshi-The-Poser/

Age: 20

How long have you been rping?: Around about five or seven years. Six probably. This includes stuff like HL2RPs, some MERPs, FORPs, Nightmare.. Alot of different roleplays.

How did you find us?: Magic. (Nah, played a bit of the old MERP aswell as being told about it by friends like Raik Arglack and KOSP.)

Have you been banned from Singularity Gaming?: Naaaaaaaaaah.

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Name: Luminda Gautier

Age: 26

Species: Human

MOS (Military Occupational Specialty): Heavy Ordinance Unit in the Alliance Military. Utilizes heavy armor, heavy weapons. Anything that goes boom is a good thing too.

You do understand as this is a private server and you have filled out a Application you can be removed from the Server or have your Character taken away within reason at any moment: Oui.


Two Paragraph Backstory(For Returning players it is only one Paragraph), Five to Seven Sentences per Paragraph:
At very young age soon after she was born on 2160, Luminda Gautier, born in France on the outskirts of Lyons on the planet Earth, was discarded by her original parents and placed into an orphanage. Eventually adopted by single mother Ablé Gautier, who also adopted another girl, Berah Gautier at the same orphanage. Ablé was reasonably strict and Berah was a mean bitch who frequently fell into fights with Luminda over increasingly petty things as they got older. Luminda's mother worked as an fighter pilot for alliance military and was frequently away for long periods, so she eventually got a Nanny called Josephi Rovie to look after the two girls, but Josephi often felt like she was powerless to stop their fighting, so things didn't improve. The sister fights never ended well and on some occasions Ms. Gautier had to come back home from her work in the military to sort them out. The two girls also went to school together and this affected both their grades heavily.

During their middle-school, the sisters' math teacher, Dianne Greene saw their brutal relationship with one another and brought them together to meet one day. Chatting with the girls about the sources of their problems revealed that the sisters' friendly math teacher was also a social-worker. The two girls also liked her as a teacher so they would both listen to her. As their meetings with Ms. Greene increased, over time, the sisters' relationship gradually grew less tense through out their middle-school years.
The both of them were quiet to one another by the end of middle-school, and they rarely got in each others way. However, they still didn't like each other very much.

Despite having made the Josephi's and and Ablé's life much easier, they were soon due to change schools. Despite both girls asking the head-teacher of the next school to employ Ms. Greene, the headmaster shrugged off the sisters and refused. As soon as they were high-school, fights began to slowly but surely break out again. After two months of arguements outbreaking again, the headmaster eventually offered employment for Ms. Greene in the high-school, and she gladly accepted. Resuming back to normal, the sisters were once again meeting with Ms. Greene, their arguements became less and even less, and the both of them scored great grades by the end of the years in school. Soon leaving the high-school, the sisters were essentially good with one another now. After some emotional goodbyes, the two united sisters bidded farewell to Ms. Greene, who promised to keep in touch. Then they were finally out of school, and back at home, the girls realized the value of friendship together.
Despite their recent reuniting, Berah had plans to find a career in the nearby city of Lyons, while Luminda was interested in the Alliance Military that her mother was frequently away on. Her mother often told stories to the sisters of her piloting adventures, which enriched Luminda's interest in the military.

At 19, Luminda enlisted for the military and went through rigorous exercises and training.
Due to her brutal childhood, she was very good at brawling and fighting, even if she didn't agree about using it for all situations. Despite her view on her physical capabilities, they were very useful and she eventually decided to join the Heavy Ordinance division once she had spent two years of standard training and schooling.
Luminda was enjoying her work, even if she didn't socialize with her colleagues as much as she wanted to. After two years of standard military schooling and training, she was recruited into the Heavy Ordinance Division of the Alliance Military.
After dedicated training in the Heavy Ordinance division, she began her work, helping out in numerous battles that appeared over next four years. Her service eventually brought her to the Citadel in 2186, shortly after the recent Reaper Invasions, bringing her to her new assignment on the SSV London.


(sorry boss it wasn't 2 paragraphs)

Looks good to me, accepted.