Sail's (New Format) Turian App

Satan has allowed me to use the same character I used for my origional application.
Just got accepted by Not-prepared to die.


Steam Name Sail
Steam ID STEAM_0:1:41664270
Profile Link http://steamcommunity.com/id/Sailsan
Age 18
How long have you been rping 5 Years
How did you find us? Atlas and Jhar
Have you been banned from Singularity Gaming? Nope.


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Name Neilar "Nil" Lumin

Age 29

Species Turian

Why do you want to roleplay a character of said species? I personally take a general interest of them because of their militaristic culture, how their societies function, and their history. I also fathom their appearance; I do feel that the ability for them to have differing and unique facial tattos adds a bit of creativity to which I find attractive.

How familiar are you with it? I've read up their wiki and also played ME; I am quite familiar with the Turians in general.

MOS (Military Occupational Specialty) Senior Combat Medic  and/or Infantry (adaptive, long range combat)
I personally would like to try to merge both Senior Combat Medic and Infantry- Adaptive Combat together. This would mean that Neilar would be able to assist hospital-staff while still working as an effective infantryman.


Why do you want to roleplay within said MOS? I am rather skilled in adaptive combat IRL; I have been noted to use the environments I am in to my benefit when engaging in a physical quarrel (whether it be a spar or an actual fight). I want to roleplay as a Senior Combat Medic (or a corpsman for that matter) as I have real-life certification and experience for the art, or as a Adaptive (long-range) infantryman as I prefer it over Close Quarters Combat.

How OOCly familiar are you with the topic? (Ex. Combat Medic - OOC Knowledge of Medical Procedures) I am a certified first responder, and am preparing to go to med school. I am well rounded on Emergency Medicine and Psychology.

You do understand as this is a private server and you have filled out a Application you can be removed from the Server or have your Character taken away within reason at any moment Yes.

Do you understand that any medical disabilities your character has would be present on a work form - And thus may make your character ineligible for a job in the Military? Yes.

Are you also aware that this is a Joint-Task-Force Military, and that your character will be held to the standards of a soldier? Yes.

Two Paragraph Backstory - Five to Seven Sentences per Paragraph.

Neilar Lumin was born in the citadel to a middle-class family; his father held the rank of Sergeant in C-Sec, and his mother worked as the head TRAUMA surgeon for Huerta Medical Center. As he grew up, Nil was noted to hold many notable characteristics which included his natural, fluid leadership skills; his outgoing personality, and his droll nature. These characteristics expressed themselves in full after he reached the age of eleven- where his primary educators have witnessed his efficiency in retaining control over the groups he was assigned under; not one fellow student dared to question his authoritative nature as he lead his groups to success in class assignments and activities.

Naturally, this put his parents at a moment of fear as they did not want their child to be overly-controlling, and desired for him to use his natural abilities to assist his team and not purely himself. Hence, after he turned thirteen, he took and achieved his first-aid certification under guidance of his mother and her colleagues - which not only taught him general wound treatment, but the need to remain calm during tense situations - especially while taking a leading role in such. Additionally, he  received (and passed) his first defense training under guidance his father and a former military drill instructor-friend of his; whom both desired for Nil to become a military man. The training itself was rigorous for a child Nil’s age; and went through basic defense skills such as blocking and counter-attacking. It also taught him how to resolve a hostile (and, potentially, mentally unstable) person without ever having to carry out physical harm to him or her.

As Nil’s childhood slowly began to come to a conclusion, his parents saw his potential to become a great soldier and an effective medic. Nil's parents would first send him off to Boot Camp within in Palevan on his fifteenth birthday. There, he would be placed on a military base to be trained under the art of General Combat. The training for his medical skills would then take place in a military hospital located in the planet’s capital of Cipritine; which has been noted to have one of the busiest Emergency Care Center's in the planet. This would occur after a total of seven years; post - graduation Boot Camp and after he served the Turian Military.

The first few months were stressing; as he was not fully molded to endure the likes of the rough training offered. However, Nil would adapt quickly and was able to be characterized by his ability to adapt to most combat environments and thus become quickly able work efficiently under them. His superiors especially took note of his impressive skill in long range combat; his reaction time was quick, and his depth of perception was superb enough for him to earn the title of “marksman” after the second year of his training. In addition to his skills in adaptive and long-range combat, he became well oriented in the art of Close Quarters Combat against multiple species with thanks to the combat simulations offered.

On his twentieth birthday, Nil would graduate from boot camp as a standard marksman. He would be put on active military duty for the following five years; eventually serving as an infantryman while still keeping his adaptable and long-range combat skills in check (thanks to the physical training offered within the bases he took hospitality in). After his service concluded, he would be transferred to Palevan's capital to begin his medical training.

Starting out as a general medical intern; Nil would shadow TRAUMA specialists as they handled patients enduring a wide variety of illnesses and wounds. After his first two months of shadowing, he would begin his training to become a member of the hospital’s Rapid Response Team; where they handle in-hospital emergencies primarily focusing on the Emergency Room. The training took ten months to complete - which covered patient wound and illness treatment, basic drug administration, and psychology. After he graduated the training he was immediately put in under Rapid Response Assessee; where his performance in the hospital was closely monitored by the higher-ranking staff for the following two months. What came out of Nil’s assessment was his superiors noting his significant leadership and conflict-resolution skills; which were considered highly impressive considering his young age. After his assessment was complete, Nil would spend a full two years in the same hospital as a member of its Rapid Response Team; handling patients in emergent need - essentially, this was the zenith to his medical training. Once the years ended, he would return to his parents in the citadel as a member of Huerta Medical Center's Rapid Response Team as he applies to become a member of the Joint Task Force.

Update

The original application was lackluster. I have improved grammar and added a third paragraph to the backstory.

Additionally, I have added proper spacing between the questions.

ayy lmao thumbs up

UPDATE
- Added more to the backstory.

I am confused in knowing if I posted this application in the proper section or not, as my very first turian application is here as well. Anyone able to clarify this?

Ill place this in pending for a bit, ill read shortly -promise-

I'm not a fan of having a senior officer role, I'd prefer you start off as maybe a Private first Class.

Pianotugboat wrote:I'm not a fan of having a senior officer role, I'd prefer you start off as maybe a Private first Class.

That will be alright with me. What I meant by "Senior Combat Medic" was him being noted to have seniority in the art of medicine, not on the Joint Task Force. Never intended for him to bypass rank. Just him being a normal grade officer.

With that being the only noted problem mentioned and taken care of, has the fate of this application been decided?

Consider this accepted.